Just From the First Chapter

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Just looking at that first chapter I'm not sure what to think. This book purports to be about things and people but it seems more like a book about relationship advice .... oh and let's not forget things at the very end! You know? It feels like one part is almost an afterthought. I like the thought that the two kind of work together because one clutters up the space for the other but just looking at that sneak peek I'm not sure this will be well executed.