I appreciated the smart, humorous, self-deprecating inner-dialogue displayed by both of the main characters. They both second guess what to say to one another and stumble horribly in trying to express themselves; making for the most awkward, yet endearing of first impressions on each other, and on the reader. All of the makings of a good romance are instantly present: intrigue with the opposite character, dissatisfaction with their current situation, and a feeling that they're alone in the world. The alternating points of view keep the pacing quick and the pages turning. I can't wait to see where this is headed! These two characters had me at, "Hey!"