Very good opening
I found it easy to get hooked from the start. In just 9 pages, you are intrigued and desperate for more story to read. I'm curiou to see where the story goes and how it affects Lucas and Myra.
Starting off with such a simple beginning, it is very engaging and well written. My birthday is i 5 days, so this would be a wonderful gift.
Starting off with such a simple beginning, it is very engaging and well written. My birthday is i 5 days, so this would be a wonderful gift.