Okay
I liked the characters but some of the writing (the narrations bits mainly) read really strangely to me.
I found the chapter style odd but I do like how it feels like a countdown, it really adds to the story.
This is such a small random detail but I love that the page breaks are little trains. It adds a unique flair to the story.
I found the chapter style odd but I do like how it feels like a countdown, it really adds to the story.
This is such a small random detail but I love that the page breaks are little trains. It adds a unique flair to the story.