The first section of this really got me hooked. I was all excited, sadly at the end of the sample I felt let down. It was interesting on the part about burglary. Nothing extra ordinary. The details about the baby and family was cute but I have a weakness for that. Just the first two chapters felt scattered and almost unplanned. I have no idea where this story is going and not sure what to make of it. I don't love it but I don't hate it. It was really down the middle kind of thing.