I didn't like the prologue, the first few lines of the first chapter pulled me in way more than anything before it. There way too many character names too fast for me there is no way I'd remember who all of these people are.
I do like the cover, it's pretty. The way it interacts with the text of the title is neat.
I do like the cover, it's pretty. The way it interacts with the text of the title is neat.