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Well this certainly opened with a bang. I see that this story is full of messy people in a ridiculous situation, and there is definitely an audience for this kind of story but I don't think it's quite to my taste. There was an overwhelming amount of characters introduced and I wasn't quite following who was who. The writing is very cluttered, and I can tell the tone is meant to be funny but the humor isn't quite landing with me. Overall, I liked the cover, and I feel like this could be a fast paced and engaging read for the right audience.