Quite liked this start!

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Zack Martin is kind of cocky but I liked him! I like that he seems a bit vulnerable under his jock exterior and when the captain gets him to take the fall he also seems like he was fighting doing the wrong thing?

The premise: tough jock falls for the nice guy sounds promising and I’m interested in learning how he ends up volunteering at the conservation center instead of the library.

Really good start!