First off, the cover is absolutely stunning and eye catching in a sea of books and I can definitely make out some of the references within the first few chapters. The flowers are already significant.
What I like so far is that you know so much about the family and nothing at all, especially Grey, Vivi and Iris and their dark and seemingly magical abilities. I'm very curious to find out about this mysterious event that happened. As the reader it's nice to know you're going along with solving a puzzle instead of having the answers -- and I want all the answers!! I'm eager to find out more about their father and who this mysterious person following Iris around?!
What I like so far is that you know so much about the family and nothing at all, especially Grey, Vivi and Iris and their dark and seemingly magical abilities. I'm very curious to find out about this mysterious event that happened. As the reader it's nice to know you're going along with solving a puzzle instead of having the answers -- and I want all the answers!! I'm eager to find out more about their father and who this mysterious person following Iris around?!