Starts out a little cumbersome, but then gets intriguing...
I'm not sure how I feel about the shifting POV narrative on this one. Keralie's chapters are told in the first person past tense, and the various Queen's chapters are told in the third person past tense. I'm interested to see how the rest of the book plays out once the other male lead is added in, if he'll also have chapters told him his (first person) POV?
The first chapter starts out a little clumsy, like the author is trying too shove too much description into too small a space, and it reads really awkwardly. I'm glad I stuck with it though, because once she'd gotten the main descriptions of the world building basically word-vomited out onto the page the writing got a lot better.
The first chapter starts out a little clumsy, like the author is trying too shove too much description into too small a space, and it reads really awkwardly. I'm glad I stuck with it though, because once she'd gotten the main descriptions of the world building basically word-vomited out onto the page the writing got a lot better.