The First Impression was very captivating and fun to read. I love Elias's action scenes and almost everything he does is mysterious and interesting. He gives us clues as to what he's looking for, but we still don't know and it makes me very curious! Ophelia is more of a normal character who has magical powers that she doesn't know is special yet. I'm assuming she's going to play a part in Elias's mission and that will probably be interesting too. I would love to read the rest of the story and see if the book will be formatted differently. Right now it's just the Word Document format with no illustrated headers, page numbers, or any flourishes. I am interested to see how the art will match the setting of the book.