Exciting premise but stilted prose

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The premise of this book sounded exciting, but I found the writing style to be too melodramatic, which distracted me enough that I couldn't really enjoy the story. The characters' internal thoughts as well as the dialogue seem stilted - this is not how real people think and speak. Some editing could have made this book great, though.