The cover is too busy and not revealing.
Maybe the story should start with a little intrigue rather than telling so much so soon, if that is the case. Why not tease the reader with Matt's secret about his brother? Then tease the reader along with a few twists and turns.
Maybe the story should start with a little intrigue rather than telling so much so soon, if that is the case. Why not tease the reader with Matt's secret about his brother? Then tease the reader along with a few twists and turns.