Giving away too much in the synopsis?

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The idea of the story seems like your standard medieval fantasy. A man with a dead wife and child in his backstory on a quest on behalf of a monarch. It's not necessarily a bad premise, just something I've seen a lot. I would also prefer a synopsis that doesn't give away the prince as evil immediately. That would be better left for the story to show.