The cover is way too creepy.

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The cover of this is way too creepy--I don't think I want to be anywhere near anything so viscerally repulsive.

The opening just sort of piles on the fantasy-book wordiness and melodrama and purple prose and "world-building" hokiness. It's all a bit off-putting.