Sounds exciting from the get-go

I read the first chapter, and already want to know how she gets out of the fire alive and what her injuries will be. Could do without some of the sexual innuendos, but that's hard to avoid in books today.
Don't know much about firefighting, so in addition to being a good story, this would be a book I would learn something new from as well. That's always a bonus in any story that I read.