Very Well Written

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I really enjoy all of the characters thus far. I'm excited to see who Lucie met in the woods. He seems very charming. I loved the bit about the exploding demon, and the way James's powers is told is very good. I think the misunderstanding with Cordelia and Lucie on who James loves is hilarious but potentially bad consequences? And I feel so bad for Cordelia, and I can't wait to go on this journey to help her father with her.