I thought this first impression was okay. The writing style was long-winded at times and I couldn't get fully invested in the story, although I liked where the author was going with it. I think that I just didn't get pulled in because of the way the author describes a lot of the things.
I found the cover interesting, and thought it suited the story well. I hope you find your target audience!
I found the cover interesting, and thought it suited the story well. I hope you find your target audience!