*Read part of the excerpt. I could not continue, I'm sorry.*
To sum up what I got from the excerpt:
The villain: mwahahaha, I hate Mungo (point for a unique name that I can pronounce. It's nice). I will take all of his things and his lover because I am evil.
The hero: I am a gentleman until pushed. Then I can whip out my boxing skills and seemingly western charm. People fear and respect me in the ring.
The girl: uh....eh. Love interest who tries not to fit into bad stereotypical pitfalls, but does so anyways.
To sum up what I got from the excerpt:
The villain: mwahahaha, I hate Mungo (point for a unique name that I can pronounce. It's nice). I will take all of his things and his lover because I am evil.
The hero: I am a gentleman until pushed. Then I can whip out my boxing skills and seemingly western charm. People fear and respect me in the ring.
The girl: uh....eh. Love interest who tries not to fit into bad stereotypical pitfalls, but does so anyways.