A little flat but has Potential

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I liked the Prologue introduction, however chapter one was kind of dry and predictable. I think it does have potential to be intriguing and have a few plot twists. I think for mystery thrillers they have a tendency to be underwhelming at the beginning, but get better in the middle and end. I would be interested to continue reading it though.