Developing a character takes time, however for me, it’s taking too much time in this particular story. “Blunt force” Touches on touches on the unfair treatment of women “on the job“ but doesn’t seem to have any real substance to its allegations. So far, even the murder that happens appears to be lackluster in its development. I think the storyline has possibilities but the excerpt just doesn’t give enough to keep me interested in reading the entire book. Maybe another chapter would’ve done the trick.