Okay start, but I know it'll get better

To be honest, this preview didn't grab at me. I loved the Baeduan/Iseult and Vivian/Stix interactions, but everything else seemed like orientation words instead of character interactions. Which is fine, because this is only the first few chapters! What this preview did do really well was the hinting of plot points that were explored in Sightwitch, and I get a sense that this book will tie everything together well.

Amazing job, Sooz! I've already pre-ordered ;)