I'd like to see where this is going

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Like the cover - definitely gives off more of a mystery vibe than a horror one, so I'm making the assumption that there aren't going to be any supernatural aspects.

I really liked the prologue. It has me very interested in why (I think) someone is dead and how the characters came to be so desperate.

Jumping into the actual book, the narrator changes (thank you for the name under the chapter number), but it isn't quite clear what's going on. 20 pages in, the whole idea of the trip or "Operation Cannabis Cove" is still fairly vague.

The accent that Grahame uses beginning in chapter 1 is off-putting. I'm not understanding why it's necessary, unless we're just all supposed to glean that he's an ass.