Right off the bat the swear words threw me off the book. The story itself seems like it could be good. If you can get past the language, I think the book would be really good. I want to look at the back of the book to see what is wished for. I enjoyed reading from the viewpoint of the 17 year old boy. All of the things that are going through his mind but he can't talk about. All of the pressures that are on him and things that are expected of him. Also the consequences a wish. In just these few pages, you can see how it mimics real life. As you grow up, you have a lot of important decisions to make. Of course all decisions have consequences, good and or bad. I also really want to know the details of the sister.