What would you wish for it you know it would come true?

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First, I like that I got multiple chapters in the first impression. I'm hooked now. I really want to know more about this town, what people have wished for in the past, and what the main character will ultimately wish for. Wishes are tricky, not everything you wish for is sunshine and roses. You get the good and bad. Like his dad wishing to be the best football player and as soon as his wish comes true he's hit with a career ending injury. It makes our guy question his life and what he wants out of it. Can't wait to read more.