Like the Concept, Not the Writing Style

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The cover art is interesting and makes me want to see what the book is all about. The writing style, however, is not as successful. I am not a fan of sentence fragments, as well as choppy writing. The first few sentences are both, leaving me not wanting to read more. Overall, I want to see what the book is all about, but I am not sure I can get past the writing.