Great first hook

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Right from the start, I was interested. The first paragraph grabs the attention, and the action in the first chapter keeps you hooked! There's a strong woman, vampires (!!), tea, and lots of secrets, right from the get-go. The interaction between Matteo and Arthie had me ready for more. This looks to be a promising story!