I really like the world building that this story starts with. It's elegant and flowing and does a really nice setup for the story. The characters are well writen as well, in just a few chapters, the reader can already see the personalities and directions of their goals.
I do not care for the cover. It feels too much like an indie author had a friend artist come up with it. It definitely needs to flow better.
I am interested to see where this story goes. I really like the main character and her unused powers and am curious to see where it leads.
I do not care for the cover. It feels too much like an indie author had a friend artist come up with it. It definitely needs to flow better.
I am interested to see where this story goes. I really like the main character and her unused powers and am curious to see where it leads.