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This First Look has me very intrigued. The promise of an unusual three-part structure makes this even more compelling.

We get a look at Adam, the father, the pastor's, point of view. Is he a reliable narrator? I would like to think so, but there were enough little tidbits sprinkled into the narrative that makes me think there could be some good twists and turns ahead.

I must know more about what happens to this nearly normal family!