The prologue and blurb are interesting and made me want to read more. It is well written and grammatically correct. I am assuming that chapter one is intended to introduce sibling one. It dragged a bit during the whole thing with her mom. I was a bit confused by the very young wedding picture with the supposed father and the donor dad's place in the story. I'm still interested in reading more. I think my personal knowledge what insemination and donor sperm entail made it seem unrealistic. I got knocked out of that place where I suspend reality by that incongruity.