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Great writing. Not that invested yet when I have to figure out who did what. There I had a lot of...
I start to get hooked and interested and wanting to crawl into the bodies of the two point of...
First chapter should of started with Sam and his dad's conversation and the crap before woven in...
The opening of the book is a wall of text. About as inviting as a passerby coughing or sneezing...
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