Not quite there yet

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I think this one needs more fine tuning. The writing is almost there, but feels like it's trying too hard. The descriptions aren't coming across like they're supposed to for me. I just think it isn't quite ready for publication yet. The narrative voice isn't refined enough. The cover is stunning. I would not read more to see what happens next because I just can't get past the writing style.