Interesting but a bit scattered

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I'm really interested in reading this investigative reporter's account of what happened to Mary Yoder. I do wish, however, that the story didn't jump around so much and was told a little more linearly/chronologically. Obviously Adam and/or Katie are involved, but I thought there were way too many allusions to this, their bad relationship interspersed in the story continually. Even the events of July 20 jump around, starting with an afternoon patient appointment, then back to the morning, mentioning the trip they were going on and the planning they had been doing for it, etc.