Turning out to be a great story!

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The beginning really reeled me in! Then the following chapter kept me wanting more! This seems like a really interesting story. I love how the chapters switch between perspectives. I’m interested to see more of how the two stories will intertwine. Also, I love that there’s a map! The only negative I have so far is that some of the language used is confusing, it seems like terms that pertain to this new world, but I feel like they’re stated in a way that the reader should already know what they mean. I’m sure as you continue reading the terms will make more sense, but at the start it’s hard to figure out their definitions.