Pretty good!

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I enjoyed the story. Em was a great narrator even if I found her to be sort of an unlikable character for me. I could see how she really thought she was being a good sister doing what she was doing and trying to help others and not only her sister and family and I did see how it was not her fault at all that things didn't quite work the way she thought they would. It sort of how things are in the world unfortunately and sadly, that at least the story got right, how the world is unfair often. I really loved the story she was writing and how dedicated she was, the only part I didn't enjoy was how she wasn't a very nice friend to Jess when they wanted to help in the end. I was happy in the end with how things worked out. Something else that I really didn't like was a part of the writing, when the dad is in the dialogue he would start or end a sentence in Spanish so it was sort of "spanglish' a mix of Spanish and English in every single sentence and that bothered me to no end. Although I am completely Hispanic and understood all of it people don't really talk like that, do they? I'm sure it won't bother others, it's just something that didn't worked for me.