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It started interesting and planting questions to the reader right away. Why do people want to be outside? Why is the king in jail? What’s gonna happen to the babies? That got me hooked, but still, the writing style is a little bit slow. Still with everything happening, I felt like the worlds were dragging the story rather than telling it.Really hope that this is not a problem while the story continues.