Didn’t Pull Me In

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While the blurb of this sounds super interesting, the excerpt didn’t pull me in at all. I felt like way too much of the beginning was spent on changing perspectives, and kept me from getting drawn in or connecting with the characters. I wasn’t a huge fan of the time skip, and even though I know it will be important, it threw off the flow.