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I'm not sure if the writing is so bad because this is a translation, but the first few pages are not good. The writing doesn't make grammatical sense, there are lots of typos (even periods instead of commas), and the sentence structure that begins chapter one is so unvaried and choppy that it was painful to get through. I think the cover is interesting and the concept for the book has potential, but the writing is just not there, and I would not read more.