The opening scene is great

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So far I like Keelin; she is a girl who doesn’t seem to be overly concerned with what people think, most of the time at least. I like the description in the dream scene; it was like I was flying with Keelin. Being as the excerpt was so short, I’m curious about how the “problem” will make itself known.