Ping pong on perspective

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It starts off very strong with active voice and the promise of action that feels just around the corner. You can tell the differences of the characters and who you are reading right off the bat by the different tone of the chapters.
I'm not a fan of constantly switching the narrators every chapter because it feels like watching a ping pong game and your head is snapping back and forth.
Story premise is enticing though but it remains to be seen if the plot and writing style works out for the payoff and putting up with changing narrator.