Unpolished draft, but interesting story

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The uploaded draft is unpolished, and that’s a little bit difficult for me to get past. However, I find the story interesting. Clearly this cult is only a few decades old. Why does Daniel have this power over people? What has compelled people to join with him? What is Outside? And what will happen to Miriam and Caleb, who are forced to suffer? I’d like to find out.