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First, what a whopper of a first sentence. Definitely grabs my attention. Second, the writing seems to be quite gripping and easy to follow. The world is easily painted, but I'm leery about how the world-building will turn out. I read a book with a similar water world and there were a lot of discrepancies, so I hope this does better.