Great hook!
The first couple lines really caught my attention! They really made me want to sit down and keep reading this chapter.
The main character seems a little snarky which I personally enjoy.
I am intrigued about the system of magic in this book, and definitely want to keep reading to learn more!
The main character seems a little snarky which I personally enjoy.
I am intrigued about the system of magic in this book, and definitely want to keep reading to learn more!