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This story starts right in on some action! I usually prefer third person, but I felt like there was a good amount of description that I wasn’t missing anything. I also think that this story is best written as first person from Buc’s perspective to lay out her thinking. I think that each character is very unique and well-developed. There’s an interesting relationship between Buc and Eld. I like that Buc’s thoughts revealed some of her background, and I can’t wait to learn more about her and how she came to know Eld.