Strange beginning

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Wow. * dries the sweat on her forehead* Okay, here I go:
First of all, the title of the book is quite developer. I mean... 'The Rancher's Baby'? There is a rancher in this first chapter and, even if things between the main character and him are "difficult", we know what is going to happen.
On the other hand, there is like a strong hook that keeps you reading - even if it's with arched eyebrows. The style of writing and the messes of the main character's ex-husband are great part of it.
Besides, I found a little... precipitate to focus great part of the funeral in the crush of the main character, not only because her ex-husband is *ejem* dead, but to create an atmosphere between this two characters.