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This sample was a good start to an young adult fantasy intrigue. The world set up was well done and I am interested to see how else the author builds on it. The character build could use a little work. I am hoping to see better conversations between characters.

The cover is good. It has a nice border of black flowers and brings you in to the blood filled cup. Definitely an eye catcher.