Nice Start

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I really enjoyed the first 32 pages of the book for the excerpt. The setting is interesting, and I would love to see how it expands throughout the story. The characters seem interesting, as well. I am not a big fan of the characters names; I do not think the names all fit & flow together. But that is something I can overlook compared to the story and writing.