Sets the tone for character

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The descriptions and history of the school really sets the tone of the character's dreary lifestyle. Even his old bag has significance to his failed writing. The author does a great job to describe his personality without one dialogue.

I did notice that the sentences go on for lines at a time. I may have to get used to this writing style.