Excellent story building

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Loved the first look and I am looking forward to the development.

The story is told as retrieved from internet forum communications posted by an anonymous Dr. ? Psychiatrist who starts by creating the premise that the information that follows could very well save lives. At first glance I am curious and intrigued.
The good Doctor proceeds to describe, with just enough world building, his movements toward meeting the interesting patient that, despite being a long time resident, remains undiagnosed.
The writing style is intelligent yet clear and smooth without the absolute clinical coldness that would render the emotional aspect weightless. It so much reminds me of the horror style of days gone by without the overly descriptive prose that sometimes kills the forward movement of narratives.

The patient is a mystery I am eager to explore.