I really have no attachment to the main character, especially as he's so brash and stupid to rush into something dangerous, I can't help but hope he does die/get hurt so it's not like his stupid actions are hurting others.
The mixed media format doesn't work with this overly descriptive imagery. What guy in a forum is going to use such purple prose for the weather when they really want to get to the weird thing in the hospital.
The mixed media format doesn't work with this overly descriptive imagery. What guy in a forum is going to use such purple prose for the weather when they really want to get to the weird thing in the hospital.